Wednesday, August 5, 2020

Fun Run


We were learning about writing what we did in this busy week, the things and places we went to was the fun run and the wild lab, the thing i picked was the Fun Run to write about.
I found it easy to chose out of the fun run and the wild lab because I might chose the wild lab next time because it there was so much to write.
I found it challenging to write my story about the fun run because it was hard to think of what to write about it and here's was so much going on.
Next time I will make my writing more detail for the reader to paint a picture in their mind and be interested about my writing.

2 comments:

  1. hi summer its me Manaia I really like how you made you background really nice and colourful and i also like how you made you words to be able to see next time I think you need to maybe make your words a bit bigger and then make sure I can and the readers can read it.
    from Manaia:)

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  2. Thankyou manaia for the feedback

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