Monday, September 2, 2019
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Kia ora ,Summer I liked how you made the little girl come out and got attacked from the dragon. The thing you should work on is the background just to expresion it more. Keep up the good work.
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THe dragon did't attack the girl, the girl changed into a dragon.
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